Mind wrote:
So 4000 years go by and ranu is filled with Ijika and at this time they are about where we are at in terms of technology. This is the age where they begun their space exploration. aslo when they discovered that Degada had two other sentient beings of its own.
Why did it take all the way until they developed space exploration to detect signs of life on a planet so close by? Did they not invent telescopes?
Mind wrote:
But it was not that long until the Ijika started to colonize Degada (bout 750 years).
When the Ijika moved down to Degada they offered gifts and education to the Zar and Ijitu. Most of the Ijitu accepted and became the greatest Ijitu on Degada. The zar did not like that the Ijika came and colonized their homeworld. The zar declared war on the Ijika/Ijitu.
The entire race of Zar made a declaration of war? How many Zar are there?
Mind wrote:
They've leanred from the planet that an alien civilization had lived there before.
They know becauseone of the Ijika probes found a tunnle under the ground about 500 feet. They found a city under the ground and even some high tech space ships and weapons. Of course on Degada the zar can not find out about this. I'm sure ya know why.
"That ancient race sure built a lot of weapons...I mean did they really need to spend all their time building stuff to destroy the universe? Like, how about the galaxy's biggest movie theatre or some kind of super-advanced water park?" :p
Mind wrote:
With almost 75% of Ranu dead the Ijika decide to wipe out the zar with their new high technology that's been kept away from the zar for a long time. This would be the 1st time they had won a stellar war.
Isn't it their first stellar war ever?
Mind wrote:
What you guys think?
Too sparse and broad to make any judgement calls. If you had more specifics, like individual nations and battles and people involved, I could give more of an impression.