Prepare to die.

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Re: Prepare to die.

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:eng: Hello. My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die.

:con: Zidhgebzhail - I've had to mess with the name a little to make it work.in Zidhgebzhail

agnaid. smukh-vae har-Inigoem Ontoijan. dil nedjevef-vae gOkhtun. zhahOkhtunong Ingzenau.
agnaid. smukh-Ø-v-ae har-Inigoem-Ø Ontoijan-Ø. d-il ned-jev-ef-v-ae g-Okhtu-n. zh-ah-Ø-Okht-u-n-ong Ø-Ingze-n-au.
hello. name-ABS.SG.M-1-GEN.SG.M COP1-Inigo-ABS.SG.M Montoya-ABS.SG.M. 2-ERG.SG.M old_man-relation-ACC.SG.M-1-GEN.SG.M PST-kill-SIMPLE. NOMINALISER-PASSIVE-PRS-kill-SIMPLE-BENEFACTIVE.SG.M PRS-prepare-SIMPLE-IMP
Hello. My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to be killed.
Life's a bitch, then you die.

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Re: Prepare to die.

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Noted, Ossicone. Thanks.

:con: Aloha: Alohah. Nāraka Ineigo Montoya nat. San onyakve iarelāvoh! Naleraho!
/ʌləhʌh narəkæ inigɔ mɔŋtɔjæ nʌt. sʌɴ oɲəkʋɛ jærəlavɔh! nælərʌhɔ/
Hello. Name.nom Inigo-Montoya be-3sg. You.nom father.obj kill-PRF.PRS! Die-do/must.2sg yo!
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Sikatāyām kaṇam lokasya darśasi, svargam phale vanye ca.
See a world in a grain of sand, and a heaven in a wild flower.
Ānantam tava karatalena darasi, nityatām ghaṇṭabhyantare ca.
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand, and eternity in an hour.
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Re: Prepare to die.

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No more copy-pasta please. [:(]

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Re: Prepare to die.

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:tan: Swahili
Hujambo. Jina langu ni Inigo Montoya. Ulimuua baba yangu. Jitayarishe kufa!

hu-jambo
NEG.2s-abstract.thing

jina l-angu ni Inigo Montoya
name(5) 5-GEN.1s PRES.COP Inigo Montoya

u-li-m(w/u)-u-a baba y-angu
2s-PST-3s-kill-Ø father(9) 9-GEN.1s

ji-tayarish-e ku-f-a
REFL-prepare(TR)-SUBJ INF(15)-die-Ø
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Glossing Abbreviations: COMP = comparative, C = complementiser, ACS / ICS = accessible / inaccessible, GDV = gerundive, SPEC / NSPC = specific / non-specific, AG = agent, E = entity (person, animal, thing)
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Re: Prepare to die.

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Hello, Necromancer! How was your day?
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Re: Prepare to die.

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In the case of the translation threads, necromancy is basically unilaterally accepted. :P
Sin ar Pàrras agus nì sinne mar a thogras sinn. Choisinn sinn e agus ’s urrainn dhuinn ga loisgeadh.
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Re: Prepare to die.

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GamerGeek wrote:Hello, Necromancer! How was your day?
Where is your translation?
Glossing Abbreviations: COMP = comparative, C = complementiser, ACS / ICS = accessible / inaccessible, GDV = gerundive, SPEC / NSPC = specific / non-specific, AG = agent, E = entity (person, animal, thing)
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Ryylök. Duuldajatam Inigo Montoja. Jargatšanak attajamza. Darbathi uhrordu.

[ˈryːɮø̞k ˈduːɮdɑjɑtɑm ˈinigo̞ ˈmo̞nto̞jɑ ˈjɑrgɑt͡ʃɑnɑk ˈɑtːɑjɑmzɑ ˈdɑrbɑθi ˈuxro̞rdu]

health-2SG.POSS call-3PL>1SG.POSS inigo montoya kill-2SG.PST father-1SG.POSS-ACC prepare-2SG.IMP die-ALL

Hello. My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die.
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Ànradh wrote:In the case of the translation threads, necromancy is basically unilaterally accepted. :P
Yep, as long as you give a full translation. Speaking of which, …
Imralu wrote: :tan: Swahili
Hujambo. Jina langu ni Inigo Montoya. Ulimuua baba yangu. Jitayarishe kufa!
Imralu, a gloss and/or IPA would be good, per forum guidelines.


:con: Silvish

Bonjòr. Jo me dî Inigo Montoya. Voz ëvvan-icco mui pey. Preparävvo a molî.
/bũˈʑɔʁ | ʑo.məˈdi iˈne.gu mũˈtɔ.ja | vo.ziv.vɑ̃ˈek.ku mwiˈpɛ.ji | pʁe.paˈʁɛv.vu ɑ.muˈli/
hello | 1SG.NOM 1SG.REFL say.1SG Inigo Montoya | 2.FORM kill-PST.2FORM 1SG.POSS-ACC father-ACC | prepare-IPF.2.FORM-2.FORM.REFL to die-INF

Hello. My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die.
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:esp: Spanish

Hola. Me llamo Inigo Montoya. Mataste a mi padre. Prepárate para morir.
[ˈola ‖ me ˈjamo iˈniɣ̞o monˈtoja ‖ maˈtaste a mi ˈpað̞ɾe ‖ pɾeˈpaɾate ˈpaɾa moˈɾiɾ]
hola ‖ me llam-o Inigo Montoya ‖ mat-aste a mi-Ø padre-Ø ‖ prepar-a=te para mor-ir
hello ‖ 1SG.OBJ call-1SG.PRS.IND Inigo Montoya ‖ kill-2SG.FAM.PRET.IND OBJ.AN 1SG.POS-SG father-SG ‖ prepare-IMP.SG.FAM=2SG.OBJ to die-INF

Hello. My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die.
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:con: O Kanã

Bai sodraicĩ‘a. Dainrẽmã‘a te Inĩgo Mõtoia. Gisa‘odoi‘atã tãtõwã. Sowokãĩji‘a ka soisomĩ‘a.
[(ⁿ)baɪ̯ soⁿɖʳaɪ̯↓t͡sĩʔa ⁿdai̯↓ɳẽmãʔa te i↓nĩⁿgo mõ↓toɪ̯a ⁿgisaʔoⁿdoɪ̯↓ʔatã tãtõwã sowokãɪ̯̃↓ⁿd͡ziʔa ka soɪ̯so↓mĩʔa]
bai so-draicĩ-‘a da-inrẽ-mã-‘a te Inĩgo Mõtoia <is>ga‘o-doi-‘a-tã tãtõ-wã so-<ok>wãĩji-‘a ka so-<is>omĩ-‘a
OPT 2-blessed-MASC 1-name-STAT-MASC LOG Inigo Montoya <PRF>hit-finish-MASC-2.ERG father-1.POSS 2-<ANT>prepare-MASC DAT 2-<PRF>die-MASC
Hello. My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die.

So yeah O Kanã now has a dative particle with a range of uses, including purposives like this one. The idiomatic compound "hit-finish" for "kill" is only used for violent death.
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Re: Prepare to die.

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pmitxki wrote:Salve. Nomen mihi Inigo Montoya est. Patrem meum necavisti.
M'kay.
pmitxki wrote:Praepara mortem.
Quid? :wat:

:lat:
Salve. Enneco Montoya nomen mihi est. Patrem meum interfecisti. Para te mori.
be.well.IMPTV.2SG <Íñigo Montoya> name.NOM.SG 1SG.DAT be<PRS.3SG> | father.ACC.SG 1SG.POSS.M.ACC.SG kill<PFT.2SG> | prepare.IMPTV.2SG 2SG.ACC die<PRS.INF>

Surprised to learn, after some internautical snooping, that there is a Latinified version of Íñigo => Enneco (!?)

Yet, Montoya is Montoya is Montoya
Viz.
Iter Italicum
https://books.google.com/books?id=sxBFJ ... um&f=false

Wow. [:)]
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:con: Tirina

Prala. Uepranil nue Iniko Montoya. Towutonpasda yes hetan nue. Misoralkai enatonpas.
hello | name 1.SG.MASC.POSS Inigo Montoya | MASC-kill-PST 2.SG.MASC father 1.SG.MASC.POSS | AN.IMP-be.prepared GER-die
Hello. My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die.
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Dormouse559 wrote:Yep, as long as you give a full translation.
Well, if you insist. ;)

:con: Old Erai.

Naohaz agia. Daarcaaz Iniigo Montoiar. Iles debemakes saomorok ko e. Tandali se il kokorra ser.
[nɐ.o.hɐz ɐ.'gɪ.ɐ ‖ daːɾ.caːz ɪ.niː.go mon.'toɪ.ɐɾ ‖ ɪlɛs dɛ.bɛ.mɐ.kɛs sɐ.o.mo.ɾok 'ko ɛ ‖ tɐn.dɐ.lɪ sɛ ɪl ko.ko.'rrɐ sɛɾ ‖]
Spoiler:
peace-INAN.M.C.LOC be-IMP
naoch-az agi-a

1SG.ANM.POSS~name-INAN.M.C.NOM Inigo_Montoya-ANM.M.PR.ACC
da~arca-az Iniigo_Montoia-r

2SG-ANM.M.C.NOM 1SG.ANM.POSS~father-ANM.M.C.ACC kill-INT PST PFV
il-es de~bemak-es saomor-ok ko e

prepare-IMP COMP 2.SG-ANM.M.C.NOM die-SBJ FUT
tanda-li se il-∅ kokor-ra ser
Hello. My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die.
Sin ar Pàrras agus nì sinne mar a thogras sinn. Choisinn sinn e agus ’s urrainn dhuinn ga loisgeadh.
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Re: Prepare to die.

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Removed.
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Re: Prepare to die.

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:con: Yélian

In Yélian, the usual greeting is "sepsat". This means literally "at you", which would give the sentence an unintentionally figurative meaning (i.e. would appear to have a double meaning that was absent in the original). Hence I decided to replace the greeting by "good day".

I've had the same problem with the greeting. "Yivitaro Iyionaku" means literally "I was named Iyionaku", which appears as if this was a name given after he became an orphan and/or a hero/villain. So I decided to literally use "My name is", although this sounds high-prestige in Yélian (but still seems to be the best translation).

I translated "Prepare to die" as "start to die" because the word for "to prepare" is "siytealda", which has four syllables and hence would cause problems in dubbing. Using the ingressive in Yélian has a little "preparing" sound anyway.

Ilvatèlen. Reo vit but Inigo Montoya. Yiolkei reo pèno. Carat perolkei.
[ˈilvɐtˌɛlən. ˈɾe.o vɨ̆‿bʉt ɨˈniːxo mɔnˈtoːʃɐ. ˈɕɪ̯ɔlkɛɪ̯ ˈre.ɔ ˈpɛno. ˈkaɾɐt pəˈɾɔlkɛɪ̯]
day-EPH-good | 1SG.NOM name COP.3SG.INAN Inigo Montoya | PST-kill-2SG 1SG.POSS father | now INGR-die-2SG
Hello. My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Now start to die.
Wipe the glass. This is the usual way to start, even in the days, day and night, only a happy one.
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:usa: Hello. My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die.

[<3] Miwonša:

Tara šei. Mankwiwmo Inigo Montoya. Kwoyaniš nički anžiwmoi. Yahwo šul zaščiš, sja ši.

tar-a šei
mankw-iwm=o Inigo Montoya
kwo<ya>n-iš ničk-i anž-iwm=oi
Yahwo šul zašč-iš, sja ši.


day-SG good=NOM.SG
name-1SG.POSS=NOM.SG Inigo Montoya
Come<PAST>-2SG.PFV kill-PTCP father-1SG.PL=ACC.SG
now REL die-2PL this 2SG
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:us-ca: :con: Calef
i--Eniga Mante es ma nim. ma fadu es ded ukas; vit fav def.
[i - ɛ̃niga mãne ɛs ma nỹ - ma faɾu ɛs tet ucas - viθ fav tɛf]
Hey--Enigo Mantoya is my name. My father is dead because of you; wait for death

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:chn: Mandarin

你好。我姓蒙托亚,叫伊尼戈。你杀掉了我父亲。准备去死。
Nǐhǎo. Wǒ xìng Méngtuōyà, jiào Yīnígē. Nǐ shādiàole wǒ fùqīn. Zhǔnbèi qù sǐ.

Hello | 1SG surname Montoya, call Inigo. 2SG kill-PERF 1SG father | prepare go die
Hello. My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die.
Wipe the glass. This is the usual way to start, even in the days, day and night, only a happy one.
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:con: Ular

好好。 哪指门着蜇几把妈叫我。爸我把杀有你。订死時成你。

Lûlú. Ônókó Mŏntōjá tū nă'áw lăn. Tâ lăn tū phàn jù má. Nūn tām lhông thòn má.
[ly˧˦˥ly˥. ɔ˧˦˥ni˥kɔ˥ mɔn˥˦˧ti˧ja˥ ty˧ nɛ˧˨˩aʊ̯˥ lɛn˥˦˧ | tɛ˧˦˥ lɛn˥˦˧ ty˧ pʰɑn˩ ju˩ mɑ˥ | nyn˧ tɛm ɫɔŋ˧˦˥ tʰin˩ mɑ˥]
hello | Inigo Montoya ACC be_named 1SG | father 1SG ACC kill PST 2SG | hit die ready become 2SG
Hello. My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die.
Wipe the glass. This is the usual way to start, even in the days, day and night, only a happy one.
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