CBB Conlang Relay XVI (DONE!)
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To be precise, it wasn't actually monocrotaline. It was some molecule which I couldn't begin to identify, so I just google imagesed it and that was the closest thing. Then I used a literal translation of monocrotaline (single-rattle-substance) to create Takei-Taddatadda-Ekegateka, intended as a descriptive name 'he-who-has-a-single-rattle'. Somehow within a few texts it returned to something that made sense anyway.
I also appreciate the variety of carnivora displayed in both rings - lynxes, a leopard, a wild cat, a mongoose, an otter, a bobcat, a cougar, and a generic 'angry beast'.
I also appreciate the variety of carnivora displayed in both rings - lynxes, a leopard, a wild cat, a mongoose, an otter, a bobcat, a cougar, and a generic 'angry beast'.
Re: CBB Conlang Relay XVI (DONE!)
I'm afraid my torch and translation were accidentally excluded from the writeup, even though I did send them to Dzêta.
Re: CBB Conlang Relay XVI (DONE!)
The wrong version of my torch was posted. Two days after I sent the torch to Üdj, I realized I had made a mistake and I sent him a correction (he confirmed that he had received it). I then sent the corrected torch to Dzêta, but I never got a response from him. Bellow is the corrected torch.
Torch in Shetën Karpa:
Torch in Shetën Karpa:
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Re: CBB Conlang Relay XVI (DONE!)
Here, have the notes to which those asterisks in the Bodin-English translation correspond:
* I translate the Bodin third person animate singular pronoun, which doesn't distinguish gender, as ey/em/eir/eirs/emself in English.
** This was a conworld-native horn-shaped fruit in the previous torch; I picked the closest thing available.
*** An effort to encapsulate as many senses of the previous torch's "lump, blob, mold, fungus" as possible.
Re: CBB Conlang Relay XVI (DONE!)
Sorry about not sending the English to Dzêta - an oversight on my part. I'm currently far from home, on a different device, and can't access it, but in around five days I'll get it to you.
Mesul (the origin of the banana) in fact referred to a horn here... "Call from there to the banana" seems to have originated from the fact that "to blow a horn" is expressed as "call horn-INSTRUMENTAL", and the instrumental is the dative.
Mesul (the origin of the banana) in fact referred to a horn here... "Call from there to the banana" seems to have originated from the fact that "to blow a horn" is expressed as "call horn-INSTRUMENTAL", and the instrumental is the dative.
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Re: CBB Conlang Relay XVI (DONE!)
I find it interesting how this time, a lot of the changes in Ring 2 originate in some translational choice in HTAP.
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Here's my English text, separated by line:
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she/her
my garbage ─ 2c2ef0, areyaxi family, arskiilz, kahóra, xúuuatxia family, alushi, njabad, ẹlnk, kakúsan
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The exact word used was pøëmöstäcyã, which means to sew, ultimately, and from that, to group things together. Now, the metaphor for joining something is « being sewn into » it, rather than merged
There may honestly be enough information in the torch to take it down to its actual root, which is ëmö (« clothing »). It’s effectively built off of « DIM-clothing-creation_tool » (sewing needle, or little sewing knife).
It’s more the timing that’s culturally motivated, although with context even the use of I instead of referring back to the man in the final sentence can show some of the depth of his sorrow and regret. In Arinas tradition, stories told for the purpose of moral or life lessons are all to be in the third person. Ergo, even if experienced firsthand, the story ought be fully depersonalised. He should have maintained the third person, at least until the last sentence, but he cracked.
I’m somewhat surprised too, to be honest. For context, the Atruozan text, translated more literally, says « since my child’s…spirit was helped be guided ». After death, the person’s spirit goes on a journey to Mt. Müklä, where they are then guided to the aurora by the Great Hoary Bat Spirit. So, the funerary rites involve trying to aid their spirit during the first few days of their journey to make it there. There is an implied « to the mountain/aurora » in the use of the metaphor.
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Here's my Wangrit torch:
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Hold on, what's up with all the octal numeral systems in this relay? There seem to be at least three.qwed117 wrote: ↑03 Jul 2023 05:08 The added affect of the partitive and the number 24 in the octal HTAPpian system appears to have caused the dramatic shift here. I noted the tens numbers as "two-eight, 2-8", "three-eight, 3-8", etc., and when asked said to reference the Pamean system, another base-8 system.
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At least for me, it wasn't an octal system - instead I completely and utterly butchered the translation from qwed. That has never happened to me! In all the relays I participated in, including the one I led, I managed to get a quite faithful translation - and who would have guessed that an isolating language will trip me so much, not even counting the numbers!Üdj wrote: ↑07 Jul 2023 15:15Hold on, what's up with all the octal numeral systems in this relay? There seem to be at least three.qwed117 wrote: ↑03 Jul 2023 05:08 The added affect of the partitive and the number 24 in the octal HTAPpian system appears to have caused the dramatic shift here. I noted the tens numbers as "two-eight, 2-8", "three-eight, 3-8", etc., and when asked said to reference the Pamean system, another base-8 system.
I didn't catch on that this is a base-8 system and somehow glossed over their comment with the Pamean system. Therefore, all numbers from our queue were completely meaningless from the start. I had sentences that, while absolutely wrong, at least sound hilarious:
Of course I knew it was completely wrong, but I was already past the 72 hours mark so I decided to send it anyway. Now had I known that other people interpret the turnaround time a lot more freely and ring 2 would be finished around six weeks before ring 1... I guess I would have taken it a little more lightly and tried to save the numbers here."He prepared his child (...) who were born 5-8 and 6 years old,"
"The daughter of the beastman was located at part 2-8 and one, the daughter went there, like all children"
"Before I found that man, the daughter died (...) where somebody existed and saved 3/8 of her. "
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Hey, I at least appreciate the effort to stay more on schedule!
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Bodin is base 16 so does it count as two more octal systems? :D
also on the topic of changing timeframes, the reason the Bodin torch changed the preceding "6 years" and "8 years" to 72/96 months is because the Carebin month length is close to ours (32 days), but the calendar year length isn't (256 days) and the orbital year even less so (27 Earth years).
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This is amazing. It’s like we’re watching NIST reconstruct how an accident happened.
Twin Aster megathread
AVDIO · VIDEO · DISCO
CC = Common Caber
CK = Classical Khaya
CT = Classical Ĝare n Tim Ar
Kg = Kgáweq'
PB = Proto-Beheic
PO = Proto-O
PTa = Proto-Taltic
STK = Sisỏk Tlar Kyanà
Tm = Təmattwəspwaypksma
AVDIO · VIDEO · DISCO
CC = Common Caber
CK = Classical Khaya
CT = Classical Ĝare n Tim Ar
Kg = Kgáweq'
PB = Proto-Beheic
PO = Proto-O
PTa = Proto-Taltic
STK = Sisỏk Tlar Kyanà
Tm = Təmattwəspwaypksma
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Re: CBB Conlang Relay XVI (DONE!)
I didn't realize the relay had ended already—here's my torch, so you all can see what happened in ring 1.
Re: CBB Conlang Relay XVI (DONE!)
So when's the next relay?
By the way, this is insane.protondonor wrote: ↑23 Jul 2023 22:34 I didn't realize the relay had ended already—here's my torch, so you all can see what happened in ring 1.
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my garbage ─ 2c2ef0, areyaxi family, arskiilz, kahóra, xúuuatxia family, alushi, njabad, ẹlnk, kakúsan
she/her
my garbage ─ 2c2ef0, areyaxi family, arskiilz, kahóra, xúuuatxia family, alushi, njabad, ẹlnk, kakúsan
she/her
Re: CBB Conlang Relay XVI (DONE!)
This is so cool and truly original!protondonor wrote: ↑23 Jul 2023 22:34 I didn't realize the relay had ended already—here's my torch, so you all can see what happened in ring 1.
However, I can't help but feel sorry for VaptuantaDoi.
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Re: CBB Conlang Relay XVI (DONE!)
Iyionaku wrote: ↑25 Jul 2023 16:09This is so cool and truly original!protondonor wrote: ↑23 Jul 2023 22:34 I didn't realize the relay had ended already—here's my torch, so you all can see what happened in ring 1.
However, I can't help but feel sorry for VaputantaDoi.